Parents are responsible for the behaviour of the children. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Recently, the phenomenon of bringing up the children and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of parents responsibility toward children is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that parents play a significant role in child's behaviour. I will discuss that throughout this essay.
From the educational standpoint, role model parents can provide a society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that disciplined child as well as being responsible, are inextricably bound up. According to my personal experience, when I was a university student I performed an academic examination which discovered friendly family bringing up successful and respectful children. Thus, the beneficial consequences of being friendly and responsible apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of nurturing, poor families or breakdown families might exacerbate the consequences of children's behaviour Moreover, the fundamental aspects of irresponsibility related to this reality the demerits of juvenile delinquencies pertain to irresponsible parents. As a tangible example, a scientific research undertook by a prestigious university has asserted the downsides of criminals or violence is correlated negatively with breakdown families. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of parents impacts
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of responsible parents far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of successful children prove the significance of widely used around the world, but also pinpoint reducing criminal implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.92720306513 5.00649968141 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38852446228 2.71678728327 125% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 139.433497537 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.3689381984 50.4703680194 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.636363636 104.977214359 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174554052408 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575016575797 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391509613727 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100791546906 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384076949028 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 12.6369458128 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.75 53.1260098522 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.9458128079 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.41 11.5310837438 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.07 8.32886699507 133% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 55.0591133005 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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