Parents are responsible for the behavior of their children.To what extend do you agree or disagree.
Recently, the phenomenon of parent’s responsibility toward children and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that parents` leadership role is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that parents should be accountable for what their kids do, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From parenting standpoint allocating sufficient time for children can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that teaching social conduct as well disciplining youngsters are inextricably bound-up. According to my experience when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered that parents should provide a calm place for upbringing their offspring and fulfill their basic needs .Thus, beneficial ramifications of teaching ethical issues, moral lessons as well as social behavior can be seen.
Within the realm of abdicating responsibility, children who were violently abused by their parents might increase the consequence of committing a crime and aggressive behavior. Moreover, the fundamental aspects of doing offense by children related to this reality that the demerits of criminal family pertain to troubled children. As a tangible example, a scientific research undertook by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of speaking profanity words such as Shit, What the hell ,etc is negatively correlated with parents talking to each other in an abusive way. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of parent’s responsibility toward children.
To conclude, while there are several arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that juvenile misbehavior is affected by parents. Not only do the disadvantages of poor upbringing prove the insignificance of high rate of juvenile delinquency, but also pinpoint street crime implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1207.87684729 142% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80338983051 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2932338599 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 139.433497537 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657627118644 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 379.143842365 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.655841175 50.4703680194 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.636363636 104.977214359 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8181818182 20.9669160288 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287703368561 0.242375264174 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992993723633 0.0925447433944 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592432715465 0.071462118173 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150503915912 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787809073451 0.0609392437508 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 12.6369458128 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 53.1260098522 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.9458128079 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.66 11.5310837438 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.03 8.32886699507 132% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 55.0591133005 207% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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