Some people believe that human behavior can be changed by laws; others argue that laws have little effect on human behavior. Which opinion do you agree with? Please explain.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nk that attitude can be changed by rules . While some people argue that it has few...
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Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
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...that attitude can be changed by rules . While some people argue that it has few effec...
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Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...hat it has few effect on us. Firstly , It depends on the individual if she / h...
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...ndividual if she / he follows by herself in order to have a good behavior.Every o...
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...rself in order to have a good behavior.Every one of us is capable already what are t...
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...effect on us if we follow others opinion .Sometimes we cant decide what to do wi...
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Suggestion: Sometimes
...fect on us if we follow others opinion .Sometimes we cant decide what to do with our ow...
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...f we follow others opinion .Sometimes we cant decide what to do with our own sel...
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...we follow others opinion .Sometimes we cant decide what to do with our own self bu...
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...ollow others opinion .Sometimes we cant decide what to do with our own self but ...
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...of course we still need law in our life ..For example a college student knows that...
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... course we still need law in our life ..For example a college student knows that be...
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Line 3, column 430, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... society but still he/she committed this . So in order to address the problems law...
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...itted this . So in order to address the problems law help us to correct this problem so ...
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... our attitude. For instance some drivers are not following the sign of traffic in...
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...in the road that can lead to accidents. Therefore we need this laws in order to punish in...
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...an lead to accidents. Therefore we need this laws in order to punish in such behavio...
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Line 5, column 363, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...laws in order to punish in such behavior . In conclusion, law has little effec...
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...eave a peaceful and friendly environment .Therefore human should follow some law i...
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...ve a peaceful and friendly environment .Therefore human should follow some law in order t...
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Suggestion: Therefore,
...ve a peaceful and friendly environment .Therefore human should follow some law in order t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, of course

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 20.9802955665 181% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 1207.87684729 84% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36637931034 5.00649968141 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44530694865 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 139.433497537 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534482758621 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 331.2 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.881188625 50.4703680194 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 126.625 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.9669160288 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.0 7.25397266985 221% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.33497536946 394% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258668681766 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135842510208 0.0925447433944 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664906338208 0.071462118173 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202351478649 0.151781067708 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070075606244 0.0609392437508 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 53.1260098522 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.9458128079 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.66 11.5310837438 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 55.0591133005 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.94827586207 181% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.