The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The mentioned table illustrates the rate of various kinds of families living in poverty in Australia in the year 1999.
Overall, the highest proportion is seen in the sole parent type of family whereas the least portion is seen with the aged coupled types of family.
As it can be seen from the table that the sole parent accounted for 21% which is 232000 in amount. Likewise, the rate of single with no children type of family has a figure of 19%(359000) which is the second highest proportion of people living in poverty. In addition to this, couple with children type of family has a rate of 12% with 933000.
However, single aged person, aged couple and couple with no children accounted less the 10% which are 6%, 4% and 7% respectively. Among these family type aged couple has a less rate of people living in poverty with 48000.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this family' or 'these families'?
Suggestion: this family; these families
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, likewise, second, so, whereas, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 697.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 149.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67785234899 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33230891607 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 106.607317073 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496644295302 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 207.9 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.7551272776 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.5714285714 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 5.23603664747 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107986877664 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660732064798 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568048445799 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880870981145 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610355653707 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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