parents do not have enough time to spend with their children. That is the best to use that time doing things that are related to schoolwork.
The education is the most important part of children's lives. Rarely can we find the parents who do not care about their children's study. However, nowadays, parents are so busy and they do not have enough time for spending with their children. nevertheless, it will be necessary that they spend their time with their children. I think that parents should spend their time to do things with their children that are related to school and children's educations. Since, children really need their parents help and they can learn more when their parents are with them. My opinions will be clarified in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, children need their parents help to solve their school's problems. For example, when a student cannot solve a special math problem, he or she needs help of someone and it will be very good if his or her parents help him or her. For instance, I remember when I was a student, I could not solve my hard mathematics problem and I really needed someone help. Since I did not have any sister or brother, I always asked my father to solve that questions. Consequently, it was really appropriate manner for me to solve my problem.
Secondly, many children can learn more if they be with their parents. Actually, the presence of the parents can help children to concentrate better on their schoolwork, because in this way, children feel more self-confidence. Consequently, parents can spend their time for learning their children. For instance, I had a friend that he could not read his lessons without the presence of his mother. He really needed his mother 's attention for learning. However, this could be a problem, his mother saw this problem as a good situation to learn more to his son. Therefore, his mother spent her time with her son that were related to schoolwork and his son education.
In conclusion, I think that, parents can spend their time with their children to do some things that related to their children's educations and with this manner, children can learn more and more.
- parents do not have enough time to spend with their children. That is the best to use that time doing things that are related to schoolwork. 60
- Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past. they spend so much time on cell phone, online game, and social networking. 60
- Extinction of sea cow 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 244, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nevertheless
... time for spending with their children. nevertheless, it will be necessary that they spend t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'helps'.
Suggestion: helps
...ics problem and I really needed someone help. Since I did not have any sister or bro...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, consequently, first, however, if, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85632183908 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60758723036 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.442528735632 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3436376825 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404904909757 0.236089414692 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15432440754 0.076458572812 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.167853042949 0.0737576698707 228% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295993103791 0.150856017488 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.18165406263 0.0645574589148 281% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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