Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
In a marriage to be successful man and woman share equal responsibilities, and this applies in case of child rearing as well. It is a popular belief that mothers are only responsible for bringing up a child. In my opinion, both parents have a role to play with father's role not limited to outside world only.
To begin with, due to technological advancement more and more people are working and becoming independent. It is therefore, seen in many countries that ratio of single parents is on the rise, who can take care of child's financial needs as well as his basic needs. However, the true concept of a home where both partners collaborate with each other giving emotional support provides a better environment for child development.
Having said this, it is not necessary that father's role is confined to earning money and giving financial assistance for food, clothing and shelter, but it is also fundamental that husband must take part in daily household chores, and spend time with children, share experience with them, and allow them to share as well is of utmost importance in child rearing.
To conclude, though mothers are believed to be responsible for bringing up a child. However, role of father is equally as important. In future too this will be the golden rule of successful life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: EQUALLY_AS[1]
Message: Don't say 'equally as'. You can use either 'equally' or 'as' on its own. When comparing two nouns, use 'just as'.
Suggestion: equally; as; just as
... up a child. However, role of father is equally as important. In future too this will be t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, well, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90950226244 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78763146989 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610859728507 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.3782173625 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132678936432 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061842554545 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814546704971 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912895708186 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506265442679 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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