In many cities today, most people live in large apartment blocks. Does this kind of accommodation have more advantages or disadvantages?
It is increasingly common these days for people to live in the apartment blocks in the cities. This essay will highlight both the benefits and drawbacks resulted in this change.
Firstly, the most significant advantage of living in the apartments is security. Apartment complex usually are staffed with security guards. The reason for this is unlike the town homes apartments have more number of people living in the same block. As a result if any emergency incident happens during night time security guards will be able to come for rescue. Besides from security apartment complexes mostly will have good recreation facilities. For instance, in large cities apartments usually have play areas and club house. As a consequence people spend more quality time with others when compared to town homes.
Nevertheless, living in apartments have some problems, the most obvious of which is very less parking space. Apartments generally have open parking spaces compared to garaged parking in the town homes. Due to this some people find it difficult to find a parking spot near to their apartment. Apart from parking space apartments also have the problem of noise pollution. Apartments have people from different origins like students, elderly people leaving closeby. The chances of people making sounds during night times due to parties is more when compared to individual houses.
In conclusion, despite of the advantages the apartments have like high security and recreational facilities they also have some disadvantages like less parking space and disturbance during night time which have to be taken into consideration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, so, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.359375 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6851256772 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5390625 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1820670078 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.75 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325350968759 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118792167921 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634956915262 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195708910552 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551024230518 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.