Online shopping is increasing dramatically. How could this trend affect our environment and the kinds of jobs required?
Nowadays, technology dominates almost all aspects of human's life and it is apparent in people's daily routine. Online shopping is one of the most common achievements that technology brings about for individuals and makes life much easier. Besides, it could affect the environment in terms of diminishing the traffic congestion and providing more job opportunities for people globally.
One of the most important problems in mega cities is the traffic congestion which caused many difficulties for the residents of these areas such as air and noise pollution that can cause some diseases like stroke or heart attack. Government authorities could tackle this problem by introducing online shop to the inhabitants of metropolitan cities. People can access the variety of products just by surfing the net, comparing the prices easily and ordering whatever they need from groceries to clothes and stationary equipment. Consequently, they could curb the number of cars in the streets and reduce the pollution.
On the other hand, online shop could provide more job opportunities in the society such as web designing, online bank account system, cyber police, post and delivery service and the like. Take an online shop for example that delivers various products to the customers globally. In order to run this work, the managers need a web site to control and check the customers' orders and an advertisement company will have determining effect in introducing the shop all over the world. Moreover, delivery service companies would be involved in handing out the packages.
To sum up, online shops not only reduce the environmental problems such as traffic congestion and air pollution but also provide job opportunities for the people. This trend makes life easier and will bring more benefits in the future by enhancing the services they offer to customers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 326, Rule ID: WEB_SITE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'website'?
Suggestion: website
...r to run this work, the managers need a web site to control and check the customers orde...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, if, moreover, so, for example, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3186440678 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80212091873 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586440677966 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6617795908 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.692307692 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203946440986 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729284859649 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625092243569 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123757425193 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023478842941 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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