The biggest asset any individual can possess is his or her health. Even a country is known to progress if the percentage of healthy population in that country is high. I strongly agree with the statement that there should be basic free health services provided by countries even if it does not cover all of the medical procedures.
To begin with, every individual deserves a basic free health check-up on an annual basis as it help them become more aware of their own bodies and thus, keep them in check of their health and overall well-being. For instance, in India, government started an initiative of providing free medication to curb polio and eventually, the initiative have succeeded and India is now free of polio completely. Also, these health check-ups even help the economical under privileged people to at least get a basic health check-up which they generally can't afford.
However, science and medicine have advanced so profoundly over the years that providing every individual with all latest medical treatment can’t be possible financially as treatments and medicines are too expensive. But, every individual doesn't require all the treatments. So only those need can pay extra bucks and get themselves treated for specific disease. Moreover, a routine free health check-up helps detect a problem in its early stage which can be cured easily instead of getting to know a health ailment at its final stage and spending unexpectedly huge amount to get it treated.
To sum up, I strongly believe that free medical check-up should be provided by every country to its citizens even if it does not include the high-end, sophisticated treatments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 301, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... by countries even if it does not cover all of the medical procedures. To begin with, e...
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Line 3, column 408, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this health' or 'these healths'?
Suggestion: this health; these healths
... is now free of polio completely. Also, these health check-ups even help the economical unde...
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Line 3, column 541, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ic health check-up which they generally cant afford. However, science and medicin...
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Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...re too expensive. But, every individual doesnt require all the treatments. So only tho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, at least, for instance, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13235294118 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72507579019 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595588235294 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7941371957 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.909090909 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233348647005 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908491242359 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621480904714 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154186394924 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329427011976 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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