If you want to study a particular area of climate change, which area/subject will you choose? .
In this day and age, there is an ongoing debate among people about climate changes. While, it is possible to claim that whether research and studies in this field are beneficial or not, my view is that exploring different regions with different climate can be so appealing. For the purpose of this essay, I would like to survey the climate of the north of Iran.
To begin with, it is a common belief that climate plays a vital role in biodiversity and forest coverage in my country. To put into consideration, I express several reasons why I have chosen north of Iran. First and foremost is that the majority of the fruits and vegetable are provided in this area. Secondly, it can be argued that the quality of the products are better than the other parts that proceed from the humidity that is needed for growing agricultural products. In addition to this information, it should be mention that the rainfall can be the other prominent option that helps to forestation. A very tangible example to illustrate would be north jungles that are well known because of its national park.
However, there is no doubt that by carrying out more research in this field we can promote our export and tourism industry.It should be taken into account that the government should formulate a new policy for sophisticated students to perform their research in this area.
To conclude, numerous effort must be done about climate change in the north of Iran in order to introduce our culture and products. Moreover, some loan should be offered to farmers to progress their agricultural mechanisms.
- The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems...so who do u think Should be responsible to solve it? Is it the governments, organization or each individual? 85
- The government should reduce their investment in arts, music, and painting. Agree or disagree? 85
- In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on the society? 69
- Is television a form of entertainment or information? Discuss your views. 88
- Environmental pollution is too alarming to be managed by individuals. Real change can be made at the government level. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 85
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 521, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'mentioned'?
Suggestion: mentioned
...ition to this information, it should be mention that the rainfall can be the other prom...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...promote our export and tourism industry.It should be taken into account that the g...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, in addition, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88888888889 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64212991356 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6583844541 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0704175847274 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0279049962758 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282335638622 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0437408040658 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016815057834 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.