Dear sir,
My name is Ujwal Maharjan, I passed the job interview at your company for the post of IT Officer. Due date given for joining your prosperous company is November 15, this year. By this date, all the pending task and handover of my job responsibilities at the current company would be completed.
Unfortunately, there is a news of grievance at my immediate family. One of my uncle passed away day before yesterday because of cardiac arrest. So I must be there to attend the funeral and perform the ritual as per our cultural norms. Moreover, the culture binds us to stay in a state of solitude, stay away from meat, tomatoes and some other specific groceries for 12 days.
Thus, would like to request you to kindly grant me my absence until 20th of November to pursue my regular office duties.
However, I might be able to carry out technical assistance online or by telephone conversation.
Hope you would take my situation under consideration and look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Ujwal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 25, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...e completed. Unfortunately, there is a news of grievance at my immediate family. On...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86440677966 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74741295646 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689265536723 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7354728751 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2727272727 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0909090909 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207089630743 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761527025951 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615463755021 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912026172528 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675594695926 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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