Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere .
To what extent do you agree with this views
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Art
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Line 4, column 268, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'live'
Suggestion: live
...t least one time meal moreover they can living in slums and not capable of of a Ford b...
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Line 4, column 300, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: of
...hey can living in slums and not capable of of a Ford basic result is natural natural ...
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Line 4, column 329, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: natural
...ot capable of of a Ford basic result is natural natural thinking water that is it is it is a mu...
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Line 4, column 365, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'is it'.
Suggestion: is it
... is natural natural thinking water that is it is it is a mutual responsibilities of local b...
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Line 4, column 389, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'responsibility'?
Suggestion: responsibility
...king water that is it is it is a mutual responsibilities of local bodies that they can help the ...
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Line 4, column 777, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the best'.
Suggestion: have the best
...ce cannot migrate to urban areas we can have best opportunities in their own place. On...
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Line 6, column 190, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'generate'
Suggestion: generate
...urists to visit this page with can also generates job opportunities to the local develope...
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Line 6, column 266, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifts'?
Suggestion: lifts
...ocal developers apart from this it also lift up the economy level of the country and...
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Line 6, column 331, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... of the country and sometime it becomes a identify of the country To recalcu...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... of the country and sometime it becomes a identify of the country To recalculate ever...
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Line 9, column 44, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'does'?
Suggestion: does
...recalculate everyone has your review it do not Danny and you come but I cogitate t...
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Line 9, column 176, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...it is more such as a reduced the poverty .although spending money or not as Long c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, apart from, at least, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73770491803 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64127614869 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547540983607 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 101.0 20.2975951904 498% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 233.152787292 49.4020404114 472% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 481.666666667 106.682146367 451% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 101.666666667 20.7667163134 490% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.6666666667 7.06120827912 307% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194951198871 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13258471258 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558295480859 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120632407296 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328730217338 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 51.7 13.0946893788 395% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -22.58 50.2224549098 -45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 41.5 11.3001002004 367% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.4 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.8 8.58950901804 137% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 42.4 10.1190380762 419% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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