Global climate change. who should take responsibility to avoid climate change from government, corporate and individual discuss.
One of the conspicuous challenges of today’s world is global climate change. The effects are drastic and need immediate attention to overcome climate change challenges. Although, global climate is effected because of choice people make in their day to day life, expertise believe that government, individual and organisations should pledge allegiance to improve climate worldwide. This essay will discuss, global warming crisis and how government, individual and organisation can make informed decisions to irradiate this issue.
Firstly, global climate has imbalanced the ecological cycle in the form of acid rain, extreme hot temperatures melting ice and as a result sea level rising. Industrial pollution, also adds to the already worse situation. This is due to increase in rapid population growth. For instance, forests are being destroyed to make houses and accommodate human needs. Additionally, carbon emissions from traffic pollution is another factors which adds to the existing crisis.
Government can regulate, and to a quit extend decrease the prolix effect of climate change. This can be done by educating people, by means of television, radio broadcast etc to improve their waste throwing habits and also imposing stricter regulations and even introduce fines.
Organisation can encourage employees to opt walking or use bicycles for short distance travel. They can carry a competition to come up with better way of saving environment and award the best advice.
Individuals can start with small steps by improving littering habits and using recyclable bags when shopping.
To conclude, this essay discussed effects of global climate change and how governments, individual and organisation can alter their habits to improve environment. In my opinion, government should take responsibility to improve climate change.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 5.75862068966 313% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73454545455 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95883827996 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0026632717 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5625 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31384015284 0.242375264174 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960454647223 0.0925447433944 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101225282635 0.071462118173 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145373556757 0.151781067708 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14567296389 0.0609392437508 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 53.1260098522 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 11.5310837438 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 55.0591133005 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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