Basketball essay
Nowdays it is a well know fact that basketball is one of the most popular sports on the world. When we talk about basketball we ausually mean that there are good basketball only in the United States.
However, there are a lot of countries where the basketball is very well. Such as Spain as well as Australia.
Apart from this, a lot of countries are growing up the international level.
Let me give an example: Argentina.
Argentina is the only country who could won to the United States in an Olimpyc Game. Thus motived Argentinians to practice another sport than just football, Basketball.
Before examining this facts, let us look at disadventages and the adventages for playing basketball .
On one hand, the pross are that you will train not only you vision or your presicion , also your fast. In addition to this , your thinking . Due to basketball it is a very fast sport where you have to show your habilitys in the act.
Moreover you will be on a team. With this in mind you are going to have a lot of friends.
On the other hand, if you love the sport it is not a cons. But without a doubt, you have to train everyday to play well. If it is a hobby is not necessary.
To sum up. In my mind , basketball is the best sport on the world given that you have a team who can help you in bad moments.
Futhermore you will make many friends for other teams as well as other country if you are on the national team.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, thus, well, apart from, in addition, mind you, such as, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 265.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40754716981 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47022321734 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532075471698 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 618.680645161 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4817978472 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.4 100.406767564 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.25 20.6045352989 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.53405017921 243% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134508955869 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042257991748 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677287667926 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0568575661796 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747556066051 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 11.7677419355 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 58.1214874552 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.1575268817 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.41 10.9000537634 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.43 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 86.8835125448 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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