Buying happiness with money is impossible, however, some people with different views have an opinion that money is essential in human life as well as believe money can buy everything which is necessary to live easily.
On the one hand, money can buy the luxuries of life for every individual. Rich people progressively earn money to fulfill the needs of their families and try to buy desirable comfort with money. For example, on a wedding of the daughters, wealthy people spend money enormously and provide too expensive dresses, jewelry or cars but they can never purchase happiness for her. Obviously, these non-living things can give comfort but relations matters first, who gives happiness. Money helps one to lead a comfortable life and helps children to get better education. It is useful when someone needs emergency medical treatment. In addition, poor people also earn money for their children, try to attain the needs of their families even with small amounts and provide them better future.
On the other hand, happiness is a most precious thing, it can never be sold out at any cost. Happiness appears from the inner soul of the human body. Spending a valuable time with family is the key to happiness. Having much money is unlikely to increase happiness but too much money can also destroy the peace of mind. Success in career, excellent results in education, receive good news from family members is the way of enjoying happiness. Happiness can be seen in every aspect of life. For instance, a newborn baby smiles give happiness to parents, a child achieve the first position in class gives the happiness to their family, the first drop of rain provides pleasure to the farmer. There are lots of examples which causes happiness.
In conclusion, I believe that money gives everything which is needed today but it can never provide the inner soul peace satisfaction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing which is necessary to live easily. On the one hand, money can buy the luxur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00952380952 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53637880355 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546031746032 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5227634712 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8235294118 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5294117647 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298736765043 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971130660754 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064694389811 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181961430375 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676294339103 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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