some people think it is more beneficial to play sports that are played in teams, eg football, however, some people think it is more beneficial to play individual sports. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Many people believe that playing sports on a team has many advantages rather than playing independently while other people think that playing sports individually like golf, swimming etc is more beneficial. This essay will analyze both points of view in turn.
Sports plays the most important role in our life. On the one hand, the benefits of playing sports in a group are many as team members in a group understand and coordinate properly with each other while playing against opposite team. For example, eight or nine players in a football team protect their football from competitors, passes the ball to their team member to hit the goal. The efforts of the team members always allow them to win the game and celebrate in a group. Additionally, in a particular team always an instructor guide their team members to play the game according to the rules and instructions which were given by the captain. For instance, captain of the cricket team instructs the players how to play the game so that they can win the game and would not allow the opposite team to make more runs.Team players are fully dependent on the captain of the team.
On the other hand, playing individually also have many advantages as a person plays the game freely and independently, no one interrupts a person in the game. An individual player uses own formulas and tricks to win the game. There are so many players in our nation who play individual sports like swimming, golf, table tennis, badminton, weightlifting play national and international level and won many medals for our country. One most famous example of a recent player, Geeta phogat is famous female wrestler won many trophies and medal for our country from last few decades. All the credit goes to her because individually without others instruction she uses her own techniques and tricks beat her competitor. The single player deserves the prize in individual sports.
In conclusion, my opinion on this views is that playing sports in most essential either playing in a team or individually. Both sports having their own advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95428571429 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67034508203 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508571428571 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3272326566 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.375 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245761454801 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093863920247 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863436171515 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204564834952 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0975569096066 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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