Nowadays it is a disputable topic that who is responsible for children's character? It is widely acknowledged that parents role in nurturing children is highly beneficial and I believe that there are some multifarious points to be considered to mould the behaviour of children.
To begin with, it is a common belief that parents are the backbone of the family and play a role vital role in each society. Firstly, parents are the role model of children and they tend to imitate their parents. So those families have acceptable knowledge and culture will be able to treat their future generation in the best circumstances without any violence, social disorders and so on. To justify, many juvenile crimes proceed from the families where parents are separated or addicted to some antisocial activities. Therefore, it is considered that parents attitude is one of the main factors to build sensible young children.
However, other factors are also responsible for developing well behaviour among children. Education centres and peer group influence are also taken in to account in moulding children's character. They should take necessary steps to teach some moral values to children which transforms their behaviour in a better way. Therefore, both parents and other factors are also considered in developing juvenile's character.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that parents are the best teachers and prime person to develop well mannered character among children. However, other circumstances also to be considered.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36974789916 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88850801763 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554621848739 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9549541882 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3076923077 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204957983631 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799418901412 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584257307677 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13579381846 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392476957819 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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