The prediction that people living in 21st century will have more free time because of the improvements in technology has come true. To what extent do you agree.
The advancements in technology has made the life more easy and comfortable. I strongly agree that these technological inventions provide ample of free hours to workers in this era of modernisation as compared to previous centuries.
There are many multifarious points to throw the light on this topic. Firstly, the introduction of the internet to the world
has changed the way people live. It gives a chance for the people to many things such as study, shopping and so on via online services. To justify, people buy products from markets by e-shopping methods, which is more convenient for people and enable them to do according to their wish. Thus create a lot of free time for people avoiding travel to shops. In addition to that they can purchase the products by one click from their dwelling place.
Secondly, many companies introduced robots to perform menial jobs. Therefore, people can do some other work which needs intelligence and they have more leisure hours. For example, automated machine helps the people to deposit and withdraw the money from the bank without waiting for the bank service that performed at the ancient years. Although these technical inventions created some problems to the society like unemployment, the comfort and more free hours created by this are more weighed.
In conclusion, the developments in technology has made life more easy and fast. Therefore, people are able to spend a quality time with their families and friends. I believe that more inventions will happened in the coming centuries to provide more better life for the people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10769230769 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69275820407 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0041267408 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22548636392 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721043841468 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509314220725 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110950683686 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064987312493 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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