These days ,technology plays vital role in every bodies day to day life . It is indisputable fact that recent days people have more leisure time than ever before . I completely believe that ,this is because of technological development and in this essay I will state the reasons for my view.
To begin with ,technology has provided society with many tools. Like all tools,the value of technological tools depends largely on how they are used and whether they make tasks faster or simpler. to exemplify , now a days people are highly pivot on emails,mobile phones and other telecommunication methods for communication .Hence people does not need to travel for long time to the receiver to convey the message.This will help the individual to save sometime for their recreational activities.
In addition ,in the modern era computer technology is one of the greatest inventions of technological development. The educational benefits of computer technology are manifold.Computers in class room provide young children the opportunity to learn skills,such as touch-typing and core types of programs, such as word processing and spread sheet applications they will need through out their carriers.The internet allows users to pursue informal and formal distance learning . In other words distance learning helps the student to save the time for classroom learning. This time can be used for leisure activities.
In conclusion, technological development is one of the greatest inventions of modern century.It helps the people to have more free time in their life .People are much benefited with telecommunication development and computer technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50988142292 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29153442218 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612648221344 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 99.4405009196 49.4020404114 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 126.727272727 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175177332868 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692392552745 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484318141651 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118384757093 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416130892881 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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