Your friend just had a baby. You decided to prepare a present for them. Write a letter and say
– Congratulate your friend.
– Ask when would be possible for you to visit.
– Ask what present they would like.
Hello Hellen and Martin
How are you both? I hope this letter will find you well.
I am writing to you regarding the news of burth of your child that I was glad to hear from our friends . I am so ecstatic, I congratulate you both. I hope you both will bring up a very reliable man. It was such unexpectedly for me that I cannot realize this event till now. How did you both cope with this? How are Hallen's health and the baby's health? Probably, if you have some issues, I would be glad to aid you to overcome these issues.
I would desire to visit you at your convenience . What time will it be convenient for you ?
I am going to present a gift to you, probably, you will prompt, what is a required thing for your new born baby?
Sorry, if I took a long time , apparently, you both are very busyness.
Take care and write you back soon.
Have a nice day
- Nowadays people buy a lot of things even though they don’t really need them. Why is it happening, in your opinion? Is it a positive or negative trend for the individual and the society? 84
- Nowadays, people living in large cities face many problems in their dayly lives. What are these problems? Do you think thatthe government should encourage people to move in smaller towns? 89
- There is certainly a difference in thoughts ideas and actions between children their parents and grandparents Why do these differences exist Does it cause problems in your community in your opinion 71
- Some people say it is the government’s responsibility to fund school buses, while others think parents should be responsible for bringing their kids to school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 84
- Online shopping is increasing dramatically. How could this trend affect our environment and the kinds of jobs required? 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... hope this letter will find you well. I am writing to you regarding the news of ...
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...ing the news of burth of your child that I was glad to hear from our friends . ...
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...h of your child that I was glad to hear from our friends . I am so ecstatic, ...
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...at I was glad to hear from our friends . I am so ecstatic, I congratulate you...
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... I was glad to hear from our friends . I am so ecstatic, I congratulate you bo...
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... was glad to hear from our friends . I am so ecstatic, I congratulate you bot...
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...ad to hear from our friends . I am so ecstatic, I congratulate you both. I hop...
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... so ecstatic, I congratulate you both. I hope you both will bring up a very rel...
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...gratulate you both. I hope you both will bring up a very reliable man. It was suc...
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...nexpectedly for me that I cannot realize this event till now. How did you both c...
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...cannot realize this event till now. How did you both cope with this? How are Hal...
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... desire to visit you at your convenience . What time will it be convenient for you...
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... gift to you, probably, you will prompt, what is a required thing for your new bo...
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... required thing for your new born baby? Sorry, if I took a long time , apparentl...
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...n baby? Sorry, if I took a long time , apparently, you both are very busyness....
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... write you back soon. Have a nice day
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, if, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 693.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.1497005988 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25392892873 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62874251497 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3175564224 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 46.2 76.5299724578 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.1333333333 16.8248392259 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3111178345 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106777102182 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078109616268 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147474650079 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0996692567256 0.0580467560999 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.7 8.37731958763 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.61 8.71597938144 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.45 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.