There is a saying that " honesty is the best policy". This saying is sometimes applicable to some other people.
I strongly agree, that always telling the truth is most important consideration in any relationship between people.
First of all, the advantage of telling the truth you develop trust to that person, yes, trust is the keyword. In example for this trust is that, I have a friend who got married in her early age and had children and yet my friend told me that she got married at first she's hesistant to say it because she's shy but because she thinks that if she will tell the truth to me we can build up trust and share her feelings and frustrations.
Second of all, In my view telling the truth has disadvantage. Sometimes, it can hurt the feelings of a person. In example, I have a classmate in grade school she's very talkative in the class, because my personality is really opposite to her, I'm a quiet person and thinks that if I say to her to be quiet she will be offended.
Third of all, telling the truth can be build up loyalty to that person. Loyalty is the keyword to have a good foundation in your relationship in different areas such as workplace, home, group of friends or school. In example for this, I have a friend who's personality is somewhat interesting in a way how she commands her other friend but because of her loyalty is a big factor on their friendship that last for a lifetime despite of her interesting and indifferences personality.
In conclusion of my essay, telling the truth is a foundation to build up trusts and loyalty for a long and good relationship.
That's why I strongly agree that telling the truth is important consideration in any relationship.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
There is a saying that apos; honesty is the best policy apos;. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, so, third, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63258785942 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77683389485 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450479233227 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.4811092003 48.9658058833 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.538461538 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148423462504 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847669149909 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111374774643 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129092219551 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132715964981 0.0645574589148 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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