Nowadays parents put too much pressure on the children to succeed. What is the reason for doing this. Is this a negative or positive development
With the advent of globalisation, it revolutionised the human existence. No doubt, it changed the life of the people but because of this, a lot of complaints are coming specially from children. As, their parents more emphasis on them and put pressure on them to get success. There are some reasons, which are the main cause of uprooting the problem. I will portray its factors and effects in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, there are umpteen reasons, which are the main cause of this. The predominant reason, in the fast pace of life, it is not easy to earn bread and butter, because of the competitive era. Everyone is in the race of outdo others, so that they show their superiority throughout the world and conquer on the people with their power. Due to this, parent more emphasis on their wards to make sure their breakthroughs by pressurise them to do hard work. So, they can become diligent in their life and able to combat with the situation in the future. Indeed, they are making their pupils future secure and ready them for the future hurdles.
As far as my views are concerned it has the positive effects on the children growth but sometimes it would put detrimental affects. If, they failure in their pursuit of getting success than it often leads them to this contentment and dejection and they find themselves misfit in this world. For instance, according to a survey, a section of the youth, unable to cope with the high expectation of their loving one. Due to this, they seek a temporary escape from the rigours of life, opt to either end their lives or experiments with drugs.
To recapitulate, everyone has their own views, I do not deny any of them but I deem, it is good thing of parents as they rescue their children from the future hurdles by put pressure on them to get success. However, I cogitate that they should not put too much pressure on their wards, which can ruin their whole life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, for instance, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65497076023 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52391184087 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529239766082 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.295294098 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6470588235 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1176470588 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47058823529 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191128347649 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613376909994 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494036533908 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129058383445 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251135388145 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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