By punishing murderer with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers.
Nowadays, more and more countries are avoiding from death penalty for criminals. Last decades, there were a high percentage of murderer numbers who is in prison. Some argue that society will be guilty as criminals if murderers are penalized with the corporal punishment and it would be better when murderers in prison for a life. I partially agree with this opinion and in this essay I will show both side of argument and give examples.
In general, into United Nations Organization has a Human Rights department. It can be seen that most of country in the world already have enrolled to this organization. If country the member of this organization, they should obey to their rules whereas some countries punish murderers by killing them. Also people have their own rights and the government should respect them and on trial judges and juries have to take into account. I totally agree with point because of law works for everyone equally.
Turning to the other side of argument, in many cases murderers have adequate barrister and he might be innocent on trial and someone condemn them unfairly. Consequently, murderer will do his activity again and again. I partially disagree to decision for a life prison to all murderers. That’s why for serial murderer who committed a crime frequently the government should apply a death because they never be rehabilitated in prison.
To sum up, giving punishment to murderers cannot be easy as well. There should be taken all factor to perform victim whether the murderer lives or not. It has both pros and cons decision, by the way people should be more merciful to criminals. I believe that murderers get suitable punishment for their guilts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...tries punish murderers by killing them. Also people have their own rights and the go...
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Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'condemns'.
Suggestion: condemns
... might be innocent on trial and someone condemn them unfairly. Consequently, murderer w...
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Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be never
...nment should apply a death because they never be rehabilitated in prison. To sum up, g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, so, well, whereas, in general, by the way, in many cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0035335689 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68138049258 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583038869258 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1190669076 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2941176471 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6470588235 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360406335138 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108775472016 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105221060998 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217863325969 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882454354382 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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