In this days, there is an opinion that some types fo employment are fitted for men and some of the jobs are proper for women. Although some people believe women are able to do many hard works, it is better for them to do lighter works. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss why I agree with this statement.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support this view and divide employments into man's works and women's jobs. At first, although women have the ability to many things, they can do lighter works due to their body condition. there are many works that women are not capable to do. For example, working in mines and replacing heavy things are hard works and are harmful to women as well as in man's power.
In addition, there are some works that are not suitable for men. Some of the works need to elegance and feminine mood. the kindergarten trainer is one of the appropriate jobs for women. For instance, a recent research conducted by MYT University researchers in 2016 shows that a significant number of primary schools in advanced countries are using female teachers because of their positive effects on breeding due to their patience and elegance mood.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments about this viewpoint, my personal sentiment is that jobs should be classified into two groups, some types suitable for women and the other types are appropriate for men.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88983050847 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54257061378 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563559322034 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2682065011 50.4703680194 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7692307692 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1538461538 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.25397266985 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325212359284 0.242375264174 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119229087116 0.0925447433944 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833571150298 0.071462118173 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199553556721 0.151781067708 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0848930354575 0.0609392437508 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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