Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In recent time, the worldwide availability for product has resulted in the fact that every country become similar to each other. In my opinion, this tendency is an advantageous development for the society and all my ideas followed by examples are outlined below.
To begin with, this international improvement has several benefits for individuals. For instance, their lifestyle will be provided with variety of foreign products. People are no longer have to travel to get they wish for or pay or high fee for shipped products. As a matter of fact, their lifestyle will be more diverse and convenient with the development of international markets. For example, when I was a child I used to wish for a foreign snack and I did not think it will possible until I travel to the countries but recently the food have been available everywhere in my country, which really took me aback.
Besides, the positivity is not only benefits citizens but also enrich the nation as well. For instance, the investment of local companies as well as the revenue from selling international products make an immense improvement on the economy. Furthermore, importing and consuming products play an important role in exchanging culture. Understanding the taste of cuisine as well as the function of several other products of a country acknowledge us about their life and appetite, which is also the fundamental aim of exchanging culture. For example, by purchasing and playing a kendama toy, we may be able to understand how ancient people in Japan entertain themselves and their offspring.
In conclusion, the fact that product being made available everywhere in the world made every country equal and from my point of view, this is a positive improvement because of several advantages is brings.
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- Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 67
- The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, may, really, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1198630137 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94804538138 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571917808219 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3483415453 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5384615385 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166743145114 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564771509898 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414177739374 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106698285708 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311724310715 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.