All over the world,people used to wear various types of garments based on their culture and geographic location. Few people believe that, it is predictable ones behavior, habits and culture from their clothes. I absolutely concur with this perspective and I will provide the justification and evidences to validate my birds eye view.
To begin with, people generally wear garments based on their ancestors traditions and whether conditions. Because, clothes are the protective shields for humans from harsh and severe earth temperature. For Instance, the people who are sheltered in ice cold places like Canada, Australia choose their garments sewing with wool which are inherited from their forefathers. Their garments are resembles to their culture and traditions. Secondly, If we consider India, is a secular country, is the origin for various cultures, where people are following various costumes and we can identify their origin based on their dressing style.
Furthermore, These days, people are able to measure one's behavior and character from their attire.Physiologists are became experts these days to draw an opinion based on the appearance, and in most of the scenarios they became succeeded. For example, In India, if a person appeared in traditional clothes says that he is from Orthodox family and the person in western clothes says he is fashion freak and updated with trends. Where as, these days youngsters are being crazy towards western culture and started wearing outrageous clothes. This change is wiping the cultural diversity and threat for one's own culture.
To Sum up, It is evident that, we can draw an opinion and impression about the character and roots based on the dressing style. And proved that, Our appearance speaks louder than our voice. But, the western culture craziness and globalization vanishing the cultural diversity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37883959044 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79904267402 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559726962457 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1958829653 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.066666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231715152075 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797040484185 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517184949841 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138029242458 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033659222592 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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