You cannot go to a company from where you have got an offer write a letter to the HR supervisor to explain the reason why you decline the offer.
express your gratitude
explain that you like your current job very much
Dear SIr
I am one of the employees who has given an interview in your company and got selected for a position due to some potential I have.I am inscribing this missive to pay my deepest regret for not able to join your organization because of some inevitable reasons
First of all, I am very grateful to you for offering me a job at your esteemed organization and it would be my privilege if I could work in your organisation.However, I am extremely sorry for not able to accept your proposal this time and the money you might have invested on me for arranging an interview.THe reason of mine for not joining this job is that the salary and othee prerequisties which has been offered by you are not equal to the amount which I'm already taken and even the position you have offered is of the lower designation as compared to my present job.
In addition, the proposal which had been made by you is not appropriate to break down my tenure with my current job.My present employer and employees are very supportive to make my career better and I owe my everything to them for making me a good person and what I Am today is just because the knowledge which I have learned from this job, while working in this organization. Moreover, I got promotion and hike in salary with good amount
I hope it will nor affect our relation and we will make a good communication for future opportunities
Thanking you
Yours faithfully. 23rd Feburary 2018
DAvis
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-02-23 | Neetika Manni | 93 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
...ge if I could work in your organisation.However, I am extremely sorry for not able to a...
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... money you might have invested on me for arranging an interview.THe reason of min...
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...y you are not equal to the amount which Im already taken and even the position you...
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Suggestion: My
...reak down my tenure with my current job.My present employer and employees are very...
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...my career better and I owe my everything to them for making me a good person and ...
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...or making me a good person and what I Am today is just because the knowledge whic...
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...es Thanking you Yours faithfully. 23rd Feburary 2018 DAvis
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, while, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 261.0 206.0 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5938697318 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87228068441 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563218390805 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 390.6 290.88556701 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6804123711 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 16.3608247423 397% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 305.778105822 44.8134815571 682% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 299.75 76.5299724578 392% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.25 16.8248392259 388% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.5 4.34317383033 380% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273988458387 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125488235737 0.0766984524023 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104306450539 0.0603063233224 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120707998594 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104455681721 0.0580467560999 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.8 8.37731958763 392% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.96 70.7449484536 20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 3.82989690722 339% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 7.45979381443 369% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.23 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 7.59969072165 131% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 8.62886597938 649% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 8.54432989691 328% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 8.15463917526 343% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.