Some people think it is more beneficial to play sports that are played in teams, e.g. football, However, some people think it is more beneficial to play individual sports , e.g. tennis and swimming , Discuss about both views and give your own opinion.
It is thought by some people that play sports with team given more beneficial rather than individual sports but other some of them thought that, individual sports have more beneficial. Do that people needs to play individual sports or play in teams ? My Opinion is , its more beneficial to play sports with playing teams.
It is essential for human to do sports for keep their body, in a good health . Thus it is identify that those both systems are given beneficial for human body. Any how played in teams are playing major circumstance in among other individual system.
In fundamentally it's improve team work between players who played in teams. It's contribution for the future carer development and build a complete human in society . While they played as a team, in order to they can identify weak point of players and they ability to learn from talented players between them. In additionally it prevent boring feeling and always be feeling to continue game with other players. Moreover it gain massive impact for brain when dealing with other team for win their own team. Then those are influence to build up moral between team members.
On the other hand there are some difficulties face when collecting more than two players regularly for a teams. At that moment playing individual sport is very essential for comparison between teams games. Furthermore , players can play anytime, whether they wish to play with the lowest manpower. Sometime there will be misbehavior or argument between team players but considering individual playing its vary rare to find fighting for win.
To sum up , it is essential to realise that more beneficial factors can allocate for players played in a teams.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, thus, while, in addition, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01413427562 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57110889048 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519434628975 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8178036891 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4705882353 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6470588235 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336180636875 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135519545239 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134047159688 0.0667982634062 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229977436125 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.162865340492 0.056905535591 286% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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