Some countries encourage teenagers to have part-time job and see it as a good thing, while others disagree. Give your opinion and explain both views.
It is thought by some countries that teenagers may prefer to do part-time job but others have a negative impact for this procedure. Do teenagers needs to do part time job or let them to stay cool? I totally agree with this statement and recommended to the all countries should encourage young generation to do at least part time job without wasting their valuable time.
The development process of any countries has main contribution given their citizen. In addition young manpower is play more revolution in society rather than the old retired work force. Thus entrepreneurs believe that those young candidate can do the work most efficiently with the lowest salary rate than the adult occupations. However government of some countries has been support teenager to have part time jobs may be benefit of above circumstances. Moreover the process is reflect with the huge amount of benefit for the economical growth and family financial stability .The parents of families are play major role to keep stability of family. It is excellent support for the parents to their children earn extra income, to recover their expenses by having part time jobs. So this will tend to develop social ethics because teenagers are learn beginning how they manage their life and how parents were feed them to grow up.
In deed, it should not having any effect to the teenagers education, while having part time jobs. They must give first priority to higher education and secondary may need to think about occupation. Whether it essential to recommended that both they needs to do with proper management.
To sum up, if any country has been given parallel support their teenagers to have part time jobs, the decision is excellent for better future of country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...his procedure. Do teenagers needs to do part time job or let them to stay cool? I totally...
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Line 1, column 320, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...courage young generation to do at least part time job without wasting their valuable time...
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Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...in contribution given their citizen. In addition young manpower is play more revolution ...
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Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...rather than the old retired work force. Thus entrepreneurs believe that those young ...
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Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...salary rate than the adult occupations. However government of some countries has been s...
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Line 3, column 401, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...tries has been support teenager to have part time jobs may be benefit of above circumstan...
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Line 3, column 455, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... may be benefit of above circumstances. Moreover the process is reflect with the huge am...
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Line 3, column 479, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'reflected'.
Suggestion: reflected
... circumstances. Moreover the process is reflect with the huge amount of benefit for the...
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Line 3, column 527, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...with the huge amount of benefit for the economical growth and family financial stability ....
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Line 3, column 575, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...al growth and family financial stability .The parents of families are play major r...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... growth and family financial stability .The parents of families are play major role...
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Line 3, column 763, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...me, to recover their expenses by having part time jobs. So this will tend to develop soci...
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Line 3, column 844, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
...lop social ethics because teenagers are learn beginning how they manage their life an...
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Line 3, column 850, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to begin'.
Suggestion: to begin
...cial ethics because teenagers are learn beginning how they manage their life and how pare...
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Line 5, column 24, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...m to grow up. In deed, it should not having any effect to the teenagers education, ...
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Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teenagers'' or 'teenager's'?
Suggestion: teenagers'; teenager's
... it should not having any effect to the teenagers education, while having part time jobs....
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Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...o the teenagers education, while having part time jobs. They must give first priority to ...
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Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ary may need to think about occupation. Whether it essential to recommended that both t...
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Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'need'
Suggestion: need
...essential to recommended that both they needs to do with proper management. To sum...
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Line 7, column 83, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...arallel support their teenagers to have part time jobs, the decision is excellent for bet...
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Line 7, column 155, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...excellent for better future of country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, thus, while, at least, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0206185567 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58051119681 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584192439863 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5645432235 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.357142857 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267937769395 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10140681963 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947772674269 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175948642828 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599582019043 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.