Some countries encourage teenagers to have part-time job and see it as a good thing, while others disagree. Give your opinion and explain both views.
Some of the people Inspire teenagers to do part time job and believe that it’s a positive ramification.
While other oppose it. I strong believe and stand with first group of people and shall express my views
on both in this essay.
First of all, it’s very beneficial for adolescents to take part-time jobs, to begin with, If the youth works part-time. They will learn time management skills. Since they have work as well as attend college to keep up with their education, they will eventually learn about, how to tactfully utilize the time to balance job and studies. Furthermore, Teenagers will become be self-dependent, which means they will not be dependent on their parents for any of their needs. Such as paying tuition fees, buying own clothes etc. Additionally, it also helps them to decide and choose their career fields, as part-time jobs gives them the opportunities to know various job trends in the market. And also teach the essences of self-responsibilities. Subsequently, working as a part-time job is advantageous for teenagers.
On the other hand, Teenagers, doing part-time jobs have few adverse effects, as, they have to study and do job as well which is stressful and perhaps focusing on studies would be difficult, resulting poor grades in their academics. Consequently, some may have to face hardship in finding aspiring jobs.
To conclude, Considering the benefits of having part-time jobs over their drawbacks, I believe encouraging teenagers will help teenagers to be active and more responsible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
Some of the people Inspire teenagers to do part tim...
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Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...e of the people Inspire teenagers to do part time job and believe that it's a positi...
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Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...that it's a positive ramification. While other oppose it. I strong believe and s...
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Line 2, column 32, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...ation. While other oppose it. I strong believe and stand with first group of people an...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oup of people and shall express my views on both in this essay. First of all, ...
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Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to time'
Suggestion: to time
... youth works part-time. They will learn time management skills. Since they have work...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, so, well, while, such as, as well as, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32926829268 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2277165112 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617886178862 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.4606888644 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6428571429 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264387967473 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936655279371 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650444300131 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141339194509 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555738075515 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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