You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to:•explain the reason why you decline the offer•express your gratitude•explain why you like your current job very much

Essay topics:

You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to:
• explain the reason why you decline the offer
• express your gratitude
• explain why you like your current job very much

Dear Sir/Madam

This is with reference to your Job offer for the post of refrigerator engineer. I am writing this letter with a great regrets,
that I love to continue with my current job and not looking for any change .

I appreciate and express my profound gratitude for considering and offering me Job. However, cannot accept<span class="hiddenSpellError" pre="cannot "></span> your offer.

I work as Automobile engineer in a tier one company, Automobile engines has been my interest since childhood.
And my current job provides an opportunity to develop new engines which I have always dreamt of , I love this job
very much and don’t want to disappoint myself winning it.

Thanks again for your offer .

Yours’s faithfully.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'your'?
Suggestion: the; your
... Sir/Madam This is with reference to the your Job offer for the post of refrigerator ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Job) must be used with a third-person verb: 'offers'.
Suggestion: offers
... This is with reference to the your Job offer for the post of refrigerator engineer. ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...riting this letter with a great regrets, that I love to continue with my current ...
^^^
Line 4, column 75, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...rrent job and not looking for any change . I appreciate and express my profound...
^^
Line 6, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d gratitude for considering and offering me Job. However, cannot accept ^^
Line 9, column 96, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ew engines which I have always dreamt of , I love this job very much and don&apo...
^^
Line 9, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... have always dreamt of , I love this job very much and don't want to disappo...
^^^
Line 12, column 28, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nning it. Thanks again for your offer . Yours's faithfully.
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, with reference to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 663.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 118.0 206.0 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6186440678 4.54256449028 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.29587325169 3.78020617076 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.10861017247 2.54303337028 162% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 127.690721649 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.720338983051 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 197.1 290.88556701 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9813792901 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7142857143 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178312419002 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089390276327 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410462702877 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827996042097 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466898547711 0.0580467560999 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 8.37731958763 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 70.7449484536 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.02 8.71597938144 172% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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