You had a good meal at a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting.
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing this letter to express my experience about an Indian restaurant in downtown and urge you to publish my reviews in your news paper.
Let me explain you the beauty of this restaurant in more detail.It's located on the opposite side of cinema hall on church street.They serve verities of Indian cuisines .However, The authentic Hyderabadi Biryani followed by deserts is the most special ones .As, I write this review, it make my mouth-watering. Perhaps you can realize how good it tastes . It has a perfect combination of Spices ,salt and such a tenderized meat that melts as you swallow.
Furthermore, It's very well-maintained hygienic restaurant with warm welcoming staff and has wide parking space, their prices are very reasonable, All these qualities makes it perfect place to dine with family.
Therefore I would recommend you to publish about this fabulous establishment ,so that other citizens can also enjoy delicious food with their families.
Hoping to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, so, then, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63414634146 4.54256449028 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.78570119225 2.54303337028 149% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.737804878049 0.622605031667 119% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.006972587 44.8134815571 268% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.0 76.5299724578 201% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 16.8248392259 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 4.34317383033 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229375615285 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108073358949 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037008368899 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12930254524 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381701055744 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 8.37731958763 224% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 70.7449484536 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 8.71597938144 180% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 8.15463917526 233% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.