Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.
Why do you think this is happening?
What can government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
Give reasons and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
In modern world, accumulating waste is increased. Some of the causes, among enormous reasons can be identified as rapid growth of industrial developments and people’s living style changes. However, in this context, governments can implement systems to minimize the ramifications.
Industrial advancements and exponential growth of industries have severe influence on garbage accumulation. More industries produce more wastes as by products. As well as increase of demand in consumer’s end requires huge production expansions. As a result, the process continues in a vicious circle where situation is worsened. Apart from that, citizen’s living standards are upgraded with more industrialization. Thus living styles and behavior patterns have dramatically changed. For instance, villages those produced lesser waste are becoming cities which now garbage is dumped in to its milieu.
Tackling this drastic issue has many dimensions to be addressed to governments. Ratifying low endorsements over the industrial discharges (or affluent) is mandatory. For example, establishing standards and regulations over waste management is to be imposed in national policy planning to minimize the waste. For each dwelling unit, authorities can have a billing systems based on the weight disposal to government dump sites. By doing that, people can be discouraged to throw all sort of rubbish outside rather managing portion garbage in their own plots. Further, material such as plastics, polythene and steels can be recycled. Sanitary landfills, instead of conventional dump site can be introduced. Biodegradable waste, from household units such as rice, vegetable and meats can be utilized to produce compost which is a potent fertilizer.
In conclusion, it is anticipated that eradicating production of more garbage is inevitable. In this scenario, feasible measures such as recycling and reusing will promote sustainability and cleaner environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...world, accumulating waste is increased. Some of the causes, among enormous reasons can be i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, thus, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88732394366 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31894168881 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654929577465 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9774909525 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.6 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158180308407 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440678459143 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521957755735 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856645577902 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188279310002 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.29 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.72 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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