Nowadays people do prefer to take their own vehicle to work or to other places, this situation is creating a lot of
jam packed road. The main reason on taking own vehicle is to eliminate the waiting time that is required while using public
transport and also the comfort level.
Taking own vehicles is beneficial at times when you have some work on the way at one or two stop before reaching your destination. Also for people who have a strict time bound jobs would be benefited with self drive, as it would be easy for them to reach to their work place on time. But this situation of self driving also increases the traffic problems during office hours.
If public transport is preferred by most of the people, then there could be much less jam packed roads. this could help in reaching to your work place on time. the other option nowadays people are considering is to do car pool, that could also reduce the umber of on road vehicles,that also helps in less pollution
- Some people think that art is the essential subject for the children at the school. while other think it is waste of time. Discuss both sides and give your opinion? 61
- Some people think that to lead a successful life a university degree is important. Others believe that this is no longer true nowadays. Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
- Stores should sell local food products and not the imported food products. Do you agree or disagree? 56
- Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines.Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages? 78
- There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home. This is because the computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative development 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...time that is required while using public transport and also the comfort level. ...
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Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'stop' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'stops'.
Suggestion: stops
...have some work on the way at one or two stop before reaching your destination. Also ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... stop before reaching your destination. Also for people who have a strict time bound...
^^^^
Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...re could be much less jam packed roads. this could help in reaching to your work pl...
^^^^
Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...acked roads. this could help in reaching to your work place on time. the other op...
^^
Line 7, column 162, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...n reaching to your work place on time. the other option nowadays people are consi...
^^^
Line 7, column 198, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me. the other option nowadays people are considering is to do car pool, that coul...
^^
Line 7, column 283, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , that
...lso reduce the umber of on road vehicles,that also helps in less pollution
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 1615.20841683 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 176.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59659090909 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27635364097 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607954545455 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 506.74238477 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4335859874 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.125 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159409132297 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727091049746 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663791592014 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962638126876 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887183260896 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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