In this day and age, many young people tend to leave their home at the youth to another city for work or study. Although this action has some negatives for teenagers, its advantages can offset its disadvantages. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss some benefits of leaving home at the early age.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support leaving home from young people to other cities for education or finding a job. At first, Although the study in a far city and away from their families maybe has financial issues for the young people, they can learn how to stay on their foot. they can solve their little problems and become self-confident as well. For example, before, my younger brother was very depended on our parent, but after one year studying far away from home, he became an independent person.
In addition, while away from home might have rational problems for young people, their problems can be covered by better financial opportunities. they can find a good job with more income in other cities rather than working in their own city. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by THN University in 2016 shows that a significant number of people have got their ideal job after migration to other cities or even foreign countries.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments about leaving the family to a far city in early age, my personal sentiment is that the benefits of sending teenagers to another city for education or work are far outweighed of its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85114503817 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53168546004 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580152671756 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8809987427 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.545454545 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.25397266985 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286650005937 0.242375264174 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125042905593 0.0925447433944 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093981769681 0.071462118173 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178851521416 0.151781067708 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775289489357 0.0609392437508 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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