The pie chart below shows tge results of a survey of the causes foor poor learning outcomes in schools in a particularly country in 2011.
The given pie chart depicts, the various causes ( upbringing, unskilled teachers, poor facility and working parents) ratio without rich specially country in 2011.
According to the graph, the highest poor category was unskilled teachers, just approximately a quater. On the other hand , the lowest lack of revision. it was shown tiny portion, just under ten. Althoughupbringing and working parents were presented roughly same ratio. Obviously, lack of revision and poor facilities were represented significantly likewise. Overall, the main cause was unskilled teachers while secoundly, was upbringing. Whereas, lack of revision and poir facility cause was illustrated the figure very low faction. The unskilled teachers were higher than other causes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: causes'; cause's
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: parents'; parent's
...led teachers, poor facility and working parents ratio without rich specially country in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 33.7804878049 24% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 641.0 965.302439024 66% => OK
No of words: 109.0 196.424390244 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88073394495 4.92477711251 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.231146315 3.73543355544 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97900366061 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688073394495 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 189.9 283.868780488 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9796598563 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2222222222 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.1111111111 22.9334400587 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111846801447 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410671184894 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626598244775 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129184189497 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808774306523 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 61.2550243902 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 10.3012195122 89% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.94 11.4140731707 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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