The articles is about great houses that was built in the year of 12th century they were settlement of Chaco canyon in new Mexico. The great houses are famous that is made of stone building that includes of wood that mostly stand to 314 stories high. Some archeopologist have tried to determine how this buildings were built, however no further evidence that is categorized with 3 theories, however, the professor are not convincing and opposes each reason. Further details are as follows.
First, the theory states that great houses is merely purely residential in which 100 people lives here that appears to be as large, famous apartment, whereas, the professor refutes this reason. He states that those great houses outside of it looks a native American apartment and the inside looks like more than 100 people are living and there is no sufficient fireplace that the people can have.That's why the professor is not convince of the first theory.
Second, the theory says that the great houses is like grain maze that can store supply food for the people and could stored food to avoid spilling and rotten the food that serves as long lasting supply of food which can help the great houses that make suitable supply of food to people, but, the professor disagree this theory . He states that grain maze is unsupported in which the excavation is uncovered. He suggest that the grain maze should move to other places.
Third, the great houses can be a place for ceremonial activities one is pueblo alto, that can identified an enormous place formed with a couple of old materials that explain the excavation of the mound revealed deposit that contain a large broken spots that result in people can gather for special ceremonies, the professor contradict the theory. He states that the ceremonial is unwell and the broken pots are trash and it's old stuff that people throw away, thus the professor states it's not a good place for ceremony.
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...e throw away, thus the professor states its not a good place for ceremony.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, second, so, third, thus, well, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.4613686534 201% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 12.0772626932 199% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1373.03311258 118% => OK
No of words: 331.0 270.72406181 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88217522659 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35793167347 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 145.348785872 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513595166163 0.540411800872 95% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 419.366225166 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 21.2450331126 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.319901538 49.2860985944 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 146.909090909 110.228320801 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0909090909 21.698381199 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.06452816374 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385068158966 0.272083759551 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124675027407 0.0996497079465 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846125000739 0.0662205650399 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21392225815 0.162205337803 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281383689661 0.0443174109184 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.3589403974 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 53.8541721854 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.0289183223 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 63.6247240618 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.498013245 133% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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