The supply of over packaged products have surged in the past century. Some people think that it is onus of the consumers to avoid over packaged products, while others argue that it is onus of the producers to avoid over packaged products. This essay will discuss that it is duty of the producers to avoid over packaged products.
First of all, the over packaging of products leads to increase in the overall cost of the products. The products like snacks must not be over packaged as such food items should be readily available for consumption. For example, lays chips is sold out at a very large scale across the world and is considered as a good snack. If it is over packaged then the overall cost of the product will increase. As a result of this the consumer will have to pay much more than the actual cost of the product.
Second of all, manufacturing companies are reducing the quantity of the product by over packaged products. The product actual quantity is very low as most of the weight of the product comes is due to over packaging. For instance, the chocolates are sold in heavy wrapped fancy material covers due to which the quantity of chocolate is very less. This results in very low consumption of the actual product by the consumer.
This essay propounds the view that it is the responsibility of the producers to avoid over packaged products due to high cost and poor quantity of products. Further, it is expected that the people make cognizance of the fact and avoid over packaged products. In my opinion, it is the responsibility of the producer to avoid over packaged products distribution in the market.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, then, while, for example, for instance, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 31.9359605911 172% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 286.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71678321678 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61835822504 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.426573426573 0.580463131201 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.8655913763 50.4703680194 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.9333333333 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445317490587 0.242375264174 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17649397735 0.0925447433944 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111504085786 0.071462118173 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296028719698 0.151781067708 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117056586157 0.0609392437508 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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