It is universally acknowledged that animals are beautiful creation of nature. Currently, usage of animals for financial prosperity is order of the day and healthy proportion of individual claimed that it is a capital idea to use animals for mankind. On the flip side, others have conflicting views. Here, I would like account for both sides with my own perception.
There are ample points to endorse the former view. To commence with, a wide range of products are precious for human health made from milk of cow, buffalo and goat. To justify, milk of goat acts as therapeutic treatment for patients who have thrombocytopenia caused by dengue. Thence, use of animals products is really lucrative for mankind. Moreover, non- vegetarian person prefers meat and beef of animals for their diet. Adding to it, there are numerous cosmetic things which are prepared from dead bodies of animals. Hence, using animals for human profits is justifiable.
By contrast, manifold points can be put down to support latter view. To embark with, like human beings, animals also have emotional attachment with their family members. Thus, it is unfair to play with their feelings while using them for personal purposes. What is more, extinction of some species of animals are on the rise. Consequently, banning animals use could be fruitful to prevent animals to be extinct.
From my notion, both aspects hold their own significance. Undeniably, animals products have plenty of benefits. However, I still believe that we should not use animals by harming or killing them for self use.
To recapitulate, we all living organisms are depend on each others either directly or
indirectly. Therefore, it is prime responsibility of human beings to curtail detrimental effects of this trend.
- Nowadays more and more people decide to have children later in their life What are the reasons What are the effects on society and family life 81
- To some people studying the past has little value in the modern world Why do you think it s important to do so What will be the effect if children are not taught history 76
- there was a civil rights movement in your city. the state government blocked mobile internet connectivity to curb the rumor spreading. you felt that this move was unreasonable lodge a complaint to chief minister for same. in your letterintroduce yoirselfd 78
- Some say all offenders should be sent to prison other argue that there are better alternatives such as community work for those who commit minor crimes Discuss both viewers and give your opinions 68
- Some people think that excessive use of mobile phones and computers badly affects teenagers writing and reading skills Do you agree or disagree with the statement Give your opinion 81
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: THERAPEUTIC_TREATMENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'treatment'.
Suggestion: treatment
... goat. To justify, milk of goat acts as therapeutic treatment for patients who have thrombocytopenia ...
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Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... vegetarian person prefers meat and beef of animals for their diet. Adding to it,...
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Line 9, column 46, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...capitulate, we all living organisms are depend on each others either directly or ind...
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Line 9, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...depend on each others either directly or indirectly. Therefore, it is prime respo...
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Line 10, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tail detrimental effects of this trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, however, if, moreover, really, so, still, then, therefore, thus, while, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22377622378 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77931342407 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618881118881 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0161113349 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.1428571429 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.619047619 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358916142321 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991140839238 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747158011193 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160609663416 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860686106617 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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