More and more people think there is no need for printed paper newspapers. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
It is true that a number of people believe that paper-printed newspapers are not beneficial and necessary any more. I totally agree with this opinion based on some reasons below.
On the one hand, traditional newspapers are not economical for not only edition companies but also audiences. One reason is that the companies who publish newspapers and magazines have to afford a huge cost for printing, designing and papers so that they would face a loss of their profit. Another reason is that readers have to spend a lot of money on printed paper newspapers to gain knowledge and information on which they focus. For example, those who are interested in the financial sections always subscribe to relevant magazines such as New York Times and Sai Gon Economy. Therefore they have to spend money every week or month to have their favorite financial magazines.
On the other hand, I admit that online press is growing dramatically with free approach and its breaking news. Firstly, everyone easily has access to internet for reading comprehensive online information that does not ask for any cost. Secondly, people can follow up-to-the-minute news that they feel exciting. Football matches broadcasted live on online news are a typical sample for this view. I do not forget the historical football between Vietnam and Qatar in the semi-final round of Asia Football Champion on February of this year that is available from many websites with the latest statement.
In conclusion, it seems to me that printed paper newspapers should be replaced with online news because some advantages of online press bring to us.
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| 2018-03-07 | quynhbong89 | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 581, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... as New York Times and Sai Gon Economy. Therefore they have to spend money every week or ...
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Line 3, column 680, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ave their favorite financial magazines. On the other hand, I admit that online p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12075471698 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7559728334 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1336656471 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.384615385 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14403031705 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510683765589 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527556059297 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949539457742 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057101404025 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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