consequence of preparing food with ease
Todays, preparing food is carrying the easiest method of itself since human start to live on earth. Like most of our achievement it has some disadvantages and advantages.
In an ancient age when human lives wildly in nature, preparing food was a main issue of the generation. Hunting with bare hand was the first way of making food. Then tools were gradually invented. cooking food on oven is much easier in compare of making fire to cook. having food which has been stored in fridge is much unchallenging than hunting.
Nowadays, supermarket supply all the necessity of live. Thanks to advantages of competitive commerce customers took delivery of the requisite swiftly. In a restaurant, whatever you desire to serve in the blink of an eye will be ready.
Ability to use the equipment grants us power of creating huge amount of food in the fastest methods. technology provide various recipe to us in order to make our life more enjoyable. thus we have more delighted time to spend with people who we love.
Easy accessible food made our generation lazy we just pick the food and eat. At most 3% of human know how much calorie they eat and how much they burn. Most of our generation are suffering from being overweight. Each year large amount of death have been caused by obese. Unhealthy food are every where with no limitation.
In conclusion, preparing food with ease improved our life but we should be concerned about how much and what we eat.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Cooking
...od. Then tools were gradually invented. cooking food on oven is much easier in compare ...
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Suggestion: Having
...sier in compare of making fire to cook. having food which has been stored in fridge is...
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Suggestion: Technology
... amount of food in the fastest methods. technology provide various recipe to us in order t...
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Line 4, column 112, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'provides'.
Suggestion: provides
...food in the fastest methods. technology provide various recipe to us in order to make o...
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Suggestion: Thus
... order to make our life more enjoyable. thus we have more delighted time to spend wi...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: thus,
... order to make our life more enjoyable. thus we have more delighted time to spend wi...
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Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: EVERY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'everywhere'?
Suggestion: everywhere
...een caused by obese. Unhealthy food are every where with no limitation. In conclusion, pre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, thus, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77380952381 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56974702515 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646825396825 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.2704703142 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.3157894737 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.2631578947 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36842105263 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273567559967 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723702400022 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834683688615 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135491826775 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884591588265 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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