A cursory discussion about advantages and disadvantages of domestic product
Lack of job opportunity is one of the main problem in this century. The Great Depression had started after world war, thus millions of people became jobless. since then job turned into the most important issue for people. have no dream to pursue is hazardous, researches have shown wasting time with no purpose is the main factor of drug addiction reason. cost of an addicted person is obvious, a largely issue about cost is health care.
occupied persons in workplaces mostly have health insurance which is significantly necessary. benefits of health insurance is visible. however, the most important advantage of health insurance is insureds are not worried about the probable disease. lower mind struggle is going to come with more life expectancy.
Thorough the history of humans civilization, cultural satisfied people live more healthier and even longer. the point is in order to have jobs, domestic product industry should be considered as the main workforces workplace to achieve better life. So the relation between industries and not only local universities but also globals is an undeniable fact. in competitive trade markets being high-tech is obligatory, and it wouldn't be accomplished without top graded university. producing a product which is culturally compatible with society is vital to keep the spirit of consistency.
In order to satisfy a country needs, expansive industrial landmarks are needed. industrial area are mostly polluted so a big contaminated landmark must have be built out far away from cities. Unfortunately in some cities namely Tehran, the industry landmark follow closely next to the city which consequent lots of problem such as air-pollution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...thus millions of people became jobless. since then job turned into the most important...
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Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Have
...to the most important issue for people. have no dream to pursue is hazardous, resear...
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Line 1, column 357, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Cost
...e main factor of drug addiction reason. cost of an addicted person is obvious, a lar...
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Line 1, column 396, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('largely') instead an adjective, or a noun ('issue') instead of another adjective.
... cost of an addicted person is obvious, a largely issue about cost is health care. occupied p...
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Suggestion: Occupied
...gely issue about cost is health care. occupied persons in workplaces mostly have healt...
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Suggestion: Benefits
...rance which is significantly necessary. benefits of health insurance is visible. however...
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Suggestion: However
...enefits of health insurance is visible. however, the most important advantage of health...
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Suggestion: Lower
...not worried about the probable disease. lower mind struggle is going to come with mor...
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Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'healthier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: healthier
...ization, cultural satisfied people live more healthier and even longer. the point is in order ...
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Suggestion: The
...le live more healthier and even longer. the point is in order to have jobs, domesti...
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Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'workforces'' or 'workforce's'?
Suggestion: workforces'; workforce's
...dustry should be considered as the main workforces workplace to achieve better life. So th...
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Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: In
...but also globals is an undeniable fact. in competitive trade markets being high-te...
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Line 3, column 422, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...s being high-tech is obligatory, and it wouldnt be accomplished without top graded univ...
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Line 3, column 477, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Producing
...mplished without top graded university. producing a product which is culturally compatibl...
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Line 4, column 81, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Industrial
...ansive industrial landmarks are needed. industrial area are mostly polluted so a big conta...
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Line 4, column 158, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...o a big contaminated landmark must have be built out far away from cities. Unfortu...
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Line 4, column 308, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of problems'.
Suggestion: lots of problems
...osely next to the city which consequent lots of problem such as air-pollution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, thus, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 24.0651302605 8% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36981132075 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87478325835 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664150943396 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3166697977 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.7058823529 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5882352941 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.29411764706 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0726299161804 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0201799968245 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387501582137 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0379409552786 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280562834969 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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