Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on every day matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in society of individuals who only think about their own wish. Others people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters affecting them.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Life is full of choices, decisions made by youngsters determines their usefulness in societies. Therefore, it is essential for children to make prudent and beneficial decisions in daily matters. This essay seeks to address whether children must make their own decisions or not.
Children develop cognitive skills and creative minds. This ability is the backbone of the fast growing technological advancement we see in the World today. Moreover, children build confidence rather that becoming selfish and therefore are able to take up inventory activities which is propelling the World at a faster pace. As a virtue of this children must be allowed to make their own decisions.
Unfortunately, People across the globe are identified by their culture. Children are expected to portray this through their dressing, food and entertainment. Youngsters, if not controlled becomes backsliders, social misfits and dress indecently. However, lack of confidence and timidity would be the hallmark of children who can not decide one their own. Finally, in societies where children are not allowed to decide on their own would lack good, productive and efficient leaders.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the backbone of a fast developing societies is the children. Therefore, they would develop confidence, and several leadership potentials by allowing them decide on matters affecting them. Youngsters can be assisted in making decisions but not decided for.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54260089686 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97952284023 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614349775785 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8123873281 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.4 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8666666667 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263425692794 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897757755779 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697450327989 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150917264154 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563815563977 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.26 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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