Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Although some people are of the opinion that there should be less attention to sports and social activities at universities or colleges and believe that they should be in second priority of allocating financial donation, I personally think they should benefit the same amount of budgetary aid as classes or libraries for two reasons.
First, in my opinion, playing sports or attending to social activities results some significant advantages for students that they cannot be neglected. For example, if a student follow a kind of sport, he will be healthier rather than he does not. Many experts hav...
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Sentence: For example, if a student follow a kind of sport, he will be healthier rather than he does not.
Description: The fragment student follow a is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace follow with verb, past tense
Sentence: Even it effects on other aspects of student's personality and inhibits them be just a one dimensional individual. because usually they should cooperate with others as a member of a team.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to it and effects
Sentence: Because nowadays, they are well known not by what major they studied at university but rather by their another talent.
Description: A determiner, possessive is not usually followed by a determiner/pronoun, singular
Suggestion: Refer to their and another
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Category: Excellent Excellent
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No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Words: 448 350
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No. of Different Words: 245 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.601 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.196 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.774 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 137 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 96 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 64 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 12.602 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.882 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.306 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.485 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.108 0.07
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