Nowadays, being a bilingual citizen can be an advantage specially considering the growing of communications and globalisation, the contact with different languages on a daily basis is a reality. Some may argue that learning a new language is only reasonable if business or pleasure abroad is involved but in my opinion, there is much more than that, as the development of intellectual capacities and better communication abilities.
Firstly, it is clear, what are the advantages of knowing a language when someone travels. Whether facilitates the work itself by increase the knowledge of the native language and therefore communication or by increase the empathy of those involved. While in any work, language is crucial, from a doctor trying to gather information from a patient to build up a diagnosis to a seller on a shop, the language skills also create a good feeling in the people involved, by making an instantaneous bond between them. But there is much more than these points to be gain.
Moreover, being bilingual is a skill that can bring benefits where we least expect. First, it can stimulate the brain to improve in different tasks and also increase the person social ability. It is scientifically confirmed that learn a new language can multiply the brain connections and synapses, in a way that performs better at multiple tasks. Furthermore, learning new words can help also to increase the vocabulary, in the native language as well, therefore increasing the social performance overall. These reasons are strong aspects that could influence someone in deciding to learn a new language.
To conclude, it is clear that speaking two or more languages can be an advantage, not only when travelling is considering, but also to self-improvement, in the social and intellectual aspects. I would also recommend, that having in account these advantages, you don't need any more reasons to start learning a new language today.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 205, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...on a daily basis is a reality. Some may argue that learning a new language is only re...
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Line 7, column 263, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...having in account these advantages, you dont need any more reasons to start learning...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18789808917 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10124536735 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550955414013 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4780054818 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.307692308 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179197006459 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691176030066 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597144421492 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113837126227 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186633059125 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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