You are going away travelling for the summer. A friend is going to look after your house while you are away.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
say where you are going
describe your house
explain some of the things your friend must do to look after your house
Dear Jack,
First, I want to thank you for accepting to look after my house. I really appreciate it. As you already know, I am going on a vacation in Vegas for ten days. My flight will depart tomorrow morning, and I'll be back on the 15th.
With regard to the house's location, the neighborhood is a safe one, and I have already installed an alarm system, thus there is no need to worry about burglary. Whenever you wanted to enter the house, please use the back door. The alarm's keypad is located behind the door, and the code is 1234. The door opens to a corridor, at the end of which you can find the stairs to the second floor. I've put my plants there.
I just want to emphasis on two things to take care of. One is my plants which need watering every two days, and the other one is my cat. I'll put enough food for him, but please fill his water plate every day. You can always find him sleeping behind the large window inside my room on the first floor.
Thank you in advance for your help. I am in your debt, and I hope I would be able to repay you as soon as possible. See you soon.
Take care,
Mehrshad
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...light will depart tomorrow morning, and Ill be back on the 15th. With regard to...
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Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'houses'' or 'house's'?
Suggestion: houses'; house's
...ack on the 15th. With regard to the houses location, the neighborhood is a safe on...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'alarms'' or 'alarm's'?
Suggestion: alarms'; alarm's
...he house, please use the back door. The alarms keypad is located behind the door, and ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 391, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...an find the stairs to the second floor. Ive put my plants there. I just want to...
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Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... two days, and the other one is my cat. Ill put enough food for him, but please fil...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, really, second, so, thus, as for, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.17431192661 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.00355294212 2.54303337028 79% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614678899083 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.463917525773 1293% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6448116719 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.5294117647 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8235294118 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88235294118 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191943651741 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613672321192 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758685231987 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128037730504 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0914840783864 0.0580467560999 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.6 8.37731958763 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.02 8.71597938144 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.04 7.59969072165 79% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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