Analysts tell us that many people feel stressed and think they have insufficient control over thier live. What problems do such feeling causes for people ? What remedies should you suggest ?
Stress continues to be unavoidable issue in modern society, as many people encounter obstacles in controlling their lives. There are several problems that people suffer as a result of this feeling, but also some straightforward measures that we can take to address this condition.
Perhaps the worst problem stemming from this phenomenon is lack of concentration. Stress might consume a great deal of energy needed in consentration, and the more severe your stress, the worse it will be. As a result, it is very hard to focus on work or pivotal things when someone have depression. A further problem is corresponded to the poor quality of sleep which appears to be insomnia in the worse cases. When people are stressed, their minds race with though instead of shutting down at night, which could be impossible to relax and fall asleep. Finally, it seems that people who have stress over long periods of time may experience negatives related to health outcome. They are likely to develop high blood preasure, headache and heart disease.
Turning to possible solutions, one of the main measures is to seek social support that can be aquired from friends or family. This could be an important buffer to againts the stress and helpful when individuals facing barriers in their lives. Secondly, it appears that physical exercise would make sameone fell better. This activity affects some brain circuits linked to the mood which would improve the ability to sleep and reduce stress. Ultimately, it is healthy diet which could contribute to promoting health and declining stress. It is believed that certain food potentially provide comfort and increase level of hormones in the body that naturally fight stress.
Overall, the problems caused from this feeling are ranging from concentration disturbance to sleep and physical disorders, and the solutions would be gaining more attention from close friends and relatives, taking physical activity and managing healthy diet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... on work or pivotal things when someone have depression. A further problem is corres...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, may, second, secondly, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65339184878 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610759493671 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8490124585 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.6875 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138797290361 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422802693202 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036158570248 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871410098794 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395965819268 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.