Over the last few decades, the trend of shopping is on an unprecedented rise. It has been claimed by few individuals that shopping cause negative influences on people’s minds and make them self-oriented and irresponsible human beings. However, i disagree with this belief. Numerous arguments are going to be discussed in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, shopping is a necessary practice for individuals to purchase several goods that are vital for their survival. An illustration can be taken of food products such as wheat,rice, sugar and others that are must to buy. Along with this, people need to fulfill their other basic needs as well such as clothes and shelter which again compel people to carry out shopping . Hence shopping serves several useful purposes in human life and must not be considered harmful.
The second reason for my view relates to the fact that shopping, in no way , makes people selfish and careless and the claim against it is flawed. To elaborate , anecdotal evidences show that every individual spend money on any new product only after a detailed research about it. Also, people are highly likely to bargain with shopkeepers before spending money. Not only this , majority of the consumers always look for certain kinds of discounts and offers, and higer sale figures of companies during their discount -sessions is a solid proof in its favour . Overall , the idea that shopping makes people careless citizens is completely invalid.
Lastly, not shopping but other factors such as fake adverstisements must be held responsible for unnecessary spending of money. As people have a tendency to develop desire for products after watching an impressive ad, causing them to spend their money unwisely. Also, people often buy goods that they donot even need under the impact of an advertisement. This results in a considerable wastage of people’s money.
To conclude, it can be reiterated that the viewpoint of considering shopping responsible for the careless and selfish nature of human beings is illogical . It is the advertisements that misguide people and cause them to behave carelessly while purchasing.
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- More and more people are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work. What will be the consequences of this? What solutions can you offer? 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, look, second, so, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29532163743 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88004530579 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590643274854 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8951285501 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3157894737 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.89473684211 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262302909986 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849033405266 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611824769398 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150093988301 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358913753661 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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