In this dayes, getting married before the end of education and finding a position in a good job is usually a foolish work. this act brings many issues for people and their families. For the purpose of this essay, I would
discuss some of the problems with marry before graduation.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support this viewpoint. At first, Although marrying is an essential need for any person, it is a bad decision for students. The student will have not enough time to search and research about their studies. For example, when I was a university student, I had knew some married student that they had no time for study and always their grades were lower than others.
In addition, marriage for the students who do not have an appropriate job has a lot of financial problems.
They could not afford to pay their costs such as tills, rents and even fulfill their food. For instance, a recent
scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2014 shows that a significant number of students that got married left university due to their financial problems.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on marriage before completing studies and
finding a good job, my personal sentiment is that it can make many family and social issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1079.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92694063927 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58139125785 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634703196347 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5704833275 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0909090909 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.12807881773 194% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173726753398 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672139187706 0.0925447433944 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980451324767 0.071462118173 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805833084579 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592589297769 0.0609392437508 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.