The bar chart gives information about the proportion of various age groups australian people engaging in physical exerces in 2010 .
As can be seen from the bar chart , mostly males who aged 15 to 24 engage in more physical activities that account for 52,8%,however;from 35 to 44 , proportion of physical activity declined significantly 39,5%.However, begining from males after 45 aged,the percentage of physical activity went up slightly to 46,7%.
Regarding to females' proportion , the most active females were 45 to 54 which accounts for 53,3%.Moreover , young women were less active compared to young men aged 15 to 24 . İn the same way , the number of people who are 65 and over was nearly the same with 46,7% and 47,1% respectively .
Overall , females are more active than male except for aged 15 to 24 .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, regarding, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 675.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 133.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07518796992 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.39596269041 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05415927782 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646616541353 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 199.8 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.9490321564 43.030603864 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 5.23603664747 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286531994122 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143971252083 0.103423049105 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899040145725 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171697280993 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787258799179 0.0819641961636 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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